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I saw your face today,
so I smiled and waved.
You looked down in dismay.
I can't believe how we both behaved.

My smile faded as I walked away,
you didn't give me a second glance.
I had nothing to say.
Should I have given you another chance?

I shouldn't be acting like this,
I am with someone new,
yet my thoughts still persist.
Do I still miss you?

As awful as we were to each other,
you will always be my first true lover.
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msimoneaux20 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Pretty good, nice rhymes and flow. The point was made just fine, but I have to admit something seems missing. Perhaps you had more to say but could'nt find the words..?? Anyways, good job! :)
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Pickled-Poppy Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Writer
It's got a lovely sentiment to it, applicable to some many people. Great work.
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NoxilcashXV Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I'm glad you like it. This did actually happen to me.
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bananabunchbunneh123 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2013  Student Writer
i really like this X3 It kind of explains something that once happend to me, :(
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