I saw your face today,
so I smiled and waved.
You looked down in dismay.
I can't believe how we both behaved.
My smile faded as I walked away,
you didn't give me a second glance.
I had nothing to say.
Should I have given you another chance?
I shouldn't be acting like this,
I am with someone new,
yet my thoughts still persist.
Do I still miss you?
As awful as we were to each other,
you will always be my first true lover.
nice rhyme and flow I quite like it ♥
Pretty good, nice rhymes and flow. The point was made just fine, but I have to admit something seems missing. Perhaps you had more to say but could'nt find the words..?? Anyways, good job!
It's got a lovely sentiment to it, applicable to some many people. Great work.
I'm glad you like it. This did actually happen to me.
i really like this X3 It kind of explains something that once happend to me,