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In the morning light
when I see your beautiful face,
your eyes shine bright,
my heart starts to race.
In the afternoon hue
when your hair starts to gleam,
and it's just me and you,
you make my love teem.
In the evening glow
when you're in full splendor,
you're all that I know,
I will love you so tender.
My love for you will never fetter.
Than you? There are none better.
when I see your beautiful face,
your eyes shine bright,
my heart starts to race.
In the afternoon hue
when your hair starts to gleam,
and it's just me and you,
you make my love teem.
In the evening glow
when you're in full splendor,
you're all that I know,
I will love you so tender.
My love for you will never fetter.
Than you? There are none better.
In my English class we had to try and mimic Shakespearean sonnet styles. I know the meter is probably off but this is what I came up with. I hope you all like it and feel free to leave a critique or comment (Good or bad)
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I enjoyed this piece, I think that it is something that everyone can relate to.
The iambic pentameter is a bit off, though.
Besides that, it's lovely. Very Shakespearean indeed
The iambic pentameter is a bit off, though.
Besides that, it's lovely. Very Shakespearean indeed