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Nobody told me,
How to act.
I wish I knew how much was too much,
or when too little was not enough.
If somebody told me,
that the small things meant the most,
and the big things were forgettable;
Where would I be today?

Nobody told me,
Who to love.
What came of the people I knew
and who were the people I would have known?
If somebody told me,
that I HAD the perfect person,
or that I am with the wrong one;
Would I be able to live with myself?

Nobody told me,
How to feel.
Is what I am feeling right or wrong,
and which should I act upon?
If somebody told me,
that I was being overly obsessive,
or that I shouldn't have let go:
Would I be the same person I am now?

Nobody told me...



...a lot...



...and I'm not sure if I'd want to know the answers.
I say this a lot but, inspiration comes at the strangest of times. I was listening to a few of Adam Young's "Sky Sailing" songs and this just hit me. I'm not sure if it came out the way I wanted but I like it. I hope you all do to :)
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Me2Smart4U Featured By Owner Jan 1, 2013  Student Digital Artist
well written indeed... I truly enjoyed reading.. it has a very deep and unique flow.. :boogie:
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AgentOrange230 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is great. And I get what you mean. Songs can be really inspiring. I really like this. :)
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musicfreak171 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is really cool! All this from a song? I know how it's like sometimes with inspiration. It's really well written. Going to my favorites!
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NoxilcashXV Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you :) I appreciate it!
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Miw-Sher13 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thats wonderful. And I understand the inspiration just hitting you. Most of my poems are based off of Songs I was listening to.
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NoxilcashXV Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks. And it's not so much that a song in a whole that inspires me, it's more like a few lyrics from a few songs that strikes chords in my head.
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Miw-Sher13 Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ya. It sometimes just needs to be a single phrase and you have an entire poem!!! And you are very welcome :3
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HopelessRomanticist Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Not bad at all!
I like it. : D
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margheritacarebear Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012
beautifully written
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